English comp 1

I am working on my portfolio and rewriting my papers. I think it is a great help when someone else reads your work to help you with some wording and the simple mistakes I made.  I am trying very hard I am not the best when it comes to writing.
Jeannette

English comp 1 t-th

I am writting my essay #2 on Depression, It is a real desease it effects more women than men. It can ruin your life or marriage. Depression can make you feel like you are living a dream until one day you wake-up, and realized you almost made the biggest mistake of your life. You feel that no one likes you. Depression can make you feel that the world is falling all around you and you cannot get out of the way because you are moving in slow motion.
Jeannette

English comp 1 t-th

English comp I, I want a wife

I read this story I thought, it would be great to have a wife. As I am a wife, mother, and best friend. It would be great to have someone do all the things I do so I can have more time to study, and the one thing I would love to have more than anyting, is to have more time with my boys and husband.  Between studying and everything else I do there is no time for me. I have not sewn anything in months and I have to make the boys their Halloween costumes very soon. I can really see her point of view, because I am there.
Jeannette